Comments on: Liberty Street

By: Amanda

Amanda — Fri, 08 Jun 2007 13:51:57 +0000

I can’t wait to see how this progresses. I enjoyed your use of dialect. It’s notoriously difficult to peg true southern speak, but you’ve got a good handle on it. Mrs. Underwood is compelling. There is something beautifully symbolic in a blind seer. About Miss Mala…seriously, what self-respecting person with southern roots is allergic to seafood? That just hurts. I hope you allow her the joy of tasting freshly steamed crawdaddies.

By: Hollie

Hollie — Fri, 08 Jun 2007 01:15:11 +0000

I love it! Why Alabama? any particular reason?

By: Dawn

Dawn — Fri, 08 Jun 2007 00:50:57 +0000

Ahhhh that felt like syrup, sweet and familiar. Good job, and great voice.

By: Claire

Claire — Thu, 07 Jun 2007 13:43:47 +0000

Very impressive! I really like your details of the street, the houses, and I am intrigued by the boy character. Great work.